Nice
Look up Phantasy Star online 2 and see the song A Lush Load. That's what this reminds me of. It has the exact same styling rhythm and everything. Very Jungle-ish
You definitely have something with this tho. Keep it up, hopefully this was at least some help to you.
Thanks for the Review, much appreciated.
I checked out the track too and I can see why it reminded you of this. They got some nice sounds on it that im gonna have to try recreate.
Cheers \\nn//
Congrats
good job on this. and it's great that ur getting ur inspiration back.
always enjoyed ur music.
-JLK
LOL!!!
I was listening to drums and bass,
then I come onto this, and it is literally drums and bass!
lol!!!
That's awesome!!
I got a kick outta it, but seriously, people might get mad finding a jazz riff when they're looking for something else. (Despite this being the very definition of Drums and Bass)
Ever thought of adding a band to this?
just for a shorty type song.
It might sound really good.
as for the song itself.
try adding a bit more talkback between the drums and bass.
that's my only suggestion.
Good Job
JLK
Meh, it was in that category before, but I changed it. :)
Adding a band to this? You lost me there.
Some talkback...that might be good, thanks.
Good ideas, expand on them and it'll sound amazing
Good, but it seemed like the guitar was kinda outta sync with the drums,
maybe its just me tho.
Great ideas going with this mix though,
Violins were a great idea, as was the entire instrumentation you chose
Guitar echoing the melody was good idea, but might want to execute it in a different way, it sounds out of place.
My tip on the guitar part sounding outta sync is to slow it down somehow, maybe change the rhythm or melody, it sounds to frantic for the relaxed pace of the song
All in all 7 out of 10
JLK
At first,it may not sound in sync,but they are.
hmmm
Definitely has potential, but u had me scared with the beginning drum beat...
seriously, I like the idea u had with that, but try changing things around. It works later, but I think there might be a beat that works even better.
Gotta say tho,
I like the atmosphere that this gives,
good-synths/instrumentation
good-ideas
bad-ending, my suggestion is to cut the drums out at the end and let it echo away for a second, or something, in the end its up to you though
thats about it
7/10
JLK
Ah, thanks for the review! I'll definitely take your advice for future songs.
LOL!
U made me choke on my breakfast!
Really creative and funny yet, still can almost hold
a full beat,
Good job
omg...I should add a choking hazard warning!....
and thank you very much for your kind words....
Why!?
U just ruined one of the best songs out there,
not to mention that you just plain stole it and put an echo on it to make people think that you actually did something, which, you didn't.
A remix is taking selections from a song and re-mixing them within your own music, placing improper effects on a song, no matter how drastic, is still stealing
Part time DJ/Sound tech here, so I do know what I am talking about
Basically you are in violation of the Copyright Law of the United States of America
Chapter 5, sections 106-122 (I'm a little unsure about the section part, so don't quote me there)... ok just checked, its 107-122
So next time, just make the song yourself,
it clears up spam on NG, and your not liable to get sued when ur the original composer/arranger. I'm sorry if this came off harsh, but this is one thing
that really gets on my nerve.
And if u need help composing a song, not just fx'ing someone else's work
then feel free to message me and I will gladly help you,
I may not be as good as Paragonx9, but I do know a trick or two.
JLK
Cool
Good job on this,
has a really good beat to it
the only thing I can suggest improving on is adding a little more depth to it,
it sounds as if you were using a midi composing software, which is good in terms that it makes you able to give original work instead of just cutting and pasting, but most midis lack on bass frequencies, so I suggest that you do something with a sort of double/octave down (maybe on the breath bass?)
all in all, great work
O and are u using noteworthy? cause I think I recognize those synths
JLK
Dang T
Dang T,
You got a hell-of-alot better,
Can I have a few lessons?
As for improvement you got a few things,
EQ and I would also like to see some pan-left/right on certain parts
But on an other note your imagery skills are flawless so keep it up
JLK
PS ya coulda sent it to me for EQ adjustment, I may not have the comp skills of you but I am a fairly good sound tech. At least thats what I've been told.
Its all in the beats
Awesome song dude,
Great beats, balance, and mix, its just awesome...
good luck on the CD's and maybe if my ska band ever gets a few good beats in I might see you in the lime lights :D.
JLK
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